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bktheirregular) wrote2011-04-04 05:10 pm
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Oddball decision
Working on a cold open for a story, and I'm debating whether to start it out as follows:
"It was supposed to be a dark and stormy night."
Still working on the next few paragraphs, which might explain why that statement is plot-significant, rather than merely atmospheric.
"It was supposed to be a dark and stormy night."
Still working on the next few paragraphs, which might explain why that statement is plot-significant, rather than merely atmospheric.
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"It wasn't a dark and stormy night. It should have been, but there's weather for you."
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